STAR: I like how you stated detailed information on Michel Jackson and it tells alot about him and who he is and what he did. Also you included alot of detail including his birth and death.
Wish: In your Timeline i think it could use pictures to show who he was and really put an image in the minds of the readers.
STAR: I like how you stated detailed information on Michel Jackson and it tells alot about him and who he is and what he did. Also you included alot of detail including his birth and death.
ReplyDeleteWish: In your Timeline i think it could use pictures to show who he was and really put an image in the minds of the readers.
-Daniela
Ok daniela,
ReplyDeleteThats good feedback beacause I didn't use any pictures.I will use that feedback.
THANKS