STAR: 1 of the thing that I liked about your timeline is that you added alot of information about Selena Gomez's life and things that she enjoys to do.Another thing I likes is that all the pictures that you used go with the information.Last of all I liked how you used links in some of the tabs and some of your pictures are in the videos from the links.
Wish:A thing that you cold improve on is that in one of the tabs it says WERE her band was formed ,but you didn't tell WHEN the band was formed so you could do that.Another thing is in one of the tabs you ,mentioned that she performed her first single on Disney radio,but you could also add one of two more tabs about her other albums. lastly you talked about her appearance on wizard of waverly place a famous Disney show and you made a tab about her appearance in Princess Protection program, so since Wizard of Waverly place is a famous show I think you should make a tab for that to.
3 thing I learned was: first I learned that her parents got divorced then remarried. The second thing I learned was that she has a band, I thought she sang alone.The last thing that I learned was that before she appeared on Disney she was on barney with Demi lovato
STAR: 1 of the thing that I liked about your timeline is that you added alot of information about Selena Gomez's life and things that she enjoys to do.Another thing I likes is that all the pictures that you used go with the information.Last of all I liked how you used links in some of the tabs and some of your pictures are in the videos from the links.
ReplyDeleteWish:A thing that you cold improve on is that in one of the tabs it says WERE her band was formed ,but you didn't tell WHEN the band was formed so you could do that.Another thing is in one of the tabs you ,mentioned that she performed her first single on Disney radio,but you could also add one of two more tabs about her other albums. lastly you talked about her appearance on wizard of waverly place a famous Disney show and you made a tab about her appearance in Princess Protection program, so since Wizard of Waverly place is a famous show I think you should make a tab for that to.
3 thing I learned was: first I learned that her parents got divorced then remarried. The second thing I learned was that she has a band, I thought she sang alone.The last thing that I learned was that before she appeared on Disney she was on barney with Demi lovato