Wish: For one of them when it said “Record Deal” it had a picture which was grate because it matched the paragraphs meaning but, I thought you should have also matched the word “Contract” on the paper in the picture to the topic.
Star: I really liked how you were clear and consisted on what you were trying to convey to the readers.
Interesting fact: It was really good that you showed a picture of the members in Hedley because, I might be a reader and know all of this about Hedley but don’t even know what they look like, but that’s okay I’m just saying that out of my perspective.
Wish: For one of them when it said “Record Deal” it had a picture which was grate because it matched the paragraphs meaning but, I thought you should have also matched the word “Contract” on the paper in the picture to the topic.
ReplyDeleteStar: I really liked how you were clear and consisted on what you were trying to convey to the readers.
Interesting fact: It was really good that you showed a picture of the members in Hedley because, I might be a reader and know all of this about Hedley but don’t even know what they look like, but that’s okay I’m just saying that out of my perspective.