Star:I liked how you should picture that would make sense for each topic.Also i like how you told about when she realeased her songs and talk about how she became singer and what she did by doing a talent show.How she did with her nsinging as if it was good are bad.
Wish:For when you were talking about the we day thing and how you put two sepperate dots from the same topic so it would be better if you put it together.One last thing is that some of your topics only had a title when you can make a samll tittle and explain at the bottom and to talk about how many albums she sold and if she had any of her own concerts just to talk more about her and what is her favorite things and hobbys.
Star:I liked how you should picture that would make sense for each topic.Also i like how you told about when she realeased her songs and talk about how she became singer and what she did by doing a talent show.How she did with her nsinging as if it was good are bad.
ReplyDeleteWish:For when you were talking about the we day thing and how you put two sepperate dots from the same topic so it would be better if you put it together.One last thing is that some of your topics only had a title when you can make a samll tittle and explain at the bottom and to talk about how many albums she sold and if she had any of her own concerts just to talk more about her and what is her favorite things and hobbys.